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23. Writing and
    Negotiating Policy

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WRITING POLICY AND MAKING IT LAST
Writing and Negotiating Policy
 
 
  23.1 Introduction
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This chapter covers the process of writing policy. It will explain how to decide what type of proposal you want to offer and how to negotiate changes as you go through the process of getting it adopted.

  23.2 Basic Principles
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Most of the important things you need to know about the philosophy of policy writing have to do with negotiating changes. They are covered below. But there are two important things you need to know at the start. First, every draft of a policy matters, even when it is clear adoption is years away.

The first draft to be introduced is likely to be the version of the proposal the board will work with, perhaps until adoption. It will be difficult for you to change something to your own advantage in that draft. It may even be difficult to improve drafts once the board or opponents have seen it, even if it hasn't been formally introduced. It is important to make the first draft introduced as strong as you can. It is hard to undo mistakes.

In a campaign that goes several years or sessions, you can try to make a "fresh start" with a completely new draft. Even if you do, board members and opponents are likely to remember features of the old one you'd like to forget. They may resurrect these features with the tough-to-answer question "if it was OK last year, what's wrong with it now."

Second, words matter (although not always). Sometimes, the use of particular words can be very important legally, even though the difference between two words might not seem important. Sometimes, court decisions or other laws create a kind of tradition, giving a word a special legal meaning.

Every stage of writing needs to be taken seriously, and that at every stage, you need a core group of writing advisors who can tell you about the legal and political consequences of any part of the proposal or any suggested change. Since this group of advisors may need to act quickly (see below) it should be small and its members should be easy to contact. The advisory group can be the core decision-making group, but it can also be a special group of advisors to the core decision makers.

  23.3 A Word About Style
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Style isn't a problem with a "drop in" proposal (a proposal to "drop" the words "sexual orientation" or "gender identity/expression" into an existing policy) or a "duplicate free standing" civil rights proposal (a proposal to create a new, separate policy on sexual orientation and/or gender identity which is identical to another policy on different kinds of discrimination). You'll be using somebody else's. With proposals you actually write, it's a major concern. Most civil rights policies and domestic partnerships (like most other laws and policies) have become needlessly difficult to read. They choose words that people don't use in everyday life, write sentences that go on too long, and repeat things two and three times. For the benefit for the average reader, try to be as straight foreword as you can be.

On the other hand, getting rid of language to which courts and enforcement agencies have give a special significance is dangerous. You not only don't get the advantage of a developed meaning, you may well suggest to people that you used different words because you meant something different. Moreover, you need to make sure that you don't use words to which courts and agencies have given special meanings you don't intend.

The writers of Berkeley's domestic partnership registration law decided to have the partners promise to provide for each other's "common welfare." They didn't define that term, but in another part of the law, they said the partners would "share the common necessities of life." They didn't realize that phrase was one letter away from a phrase courts use to mean all living expenses, including medical costs. Without meaning to, the writers may have made everyone who signs up responsible for each other's medical costs, even though the law is a simple registration system with no financial advantages.

The best solution may be to build a dialogue into your writing process. Make sure you have one writer or reviewer who knows about special language and is familiar with the traditions of policy writing (your lawyer would be the best candidate). Be sure to have one writer or reviewer who writes well and is committed to simplicity.


  23.4 Input and Refinement
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Getting suggestions from people who are familiar with civil rights policies and who share your ultimate goal will almost always make your proposal stronger. Talk to people who work with other kinds of civil rights policies. Contact lawyers at local, state and national civil rights groups, especially LGBT rights groups, and ask them to look over your proposal and give you comments. If you can, try to get input from lawyers and others who enforce policies or represent people with claims (like members of human rights or personnel departments and union representatives). Their practical perspective will be invaluable.

Chicago organizers got the local gay newspaper to print their entire civil rights proposal, and to solicit reader comments in writing. They also got comments at later public meetings.

You can build support for your proposal by circulating it in the LGBT community. If you can, schedule a public meeting or two at which you explain the proposal and ask for public comment.

  23.5 Negotiation -- Basic Principles
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If most of the members of the board and most of their constituents take it for granted that the policy is a good idea, you may not have to do a lot of negotiating. Most of the time you will.

The most difficult part of negotiating is deciding when to compromise on what things and when to hold firm. There aren't any hard and fast rules. The process is likely to be more satisfactory if you analyze each round of negotiations as a balancing process. For each alteration you negotiate over, you should decide how much you think you will really gain and how much you think you will really lose by making a change.

How much you gain is a function of two things. First, what support will making the change really get you, and how much do you need that support to get the policy passed. Second, how much sooner will you get the policy if you make the change (this second factor is based on the assumption that if you wait and work long enough, you'll be able to get almost any policy passed; give on something if you think it could never be adopted).

How much you lose depends on the likely legal effect of the change and its impact -- how many fewer people will be covered, how much harder will it be to show discrimination or qualify for a benefit. It also depends on the political impact of the change.

Part of assessing the time factor is estimating how long you might have to live with a change that does do some real harm if you accept it. Some policies, once passed, are very difficult to change; passing the policy establishes a kind of plateau. With other policies, acceptance of the idea is the tough battle, and later improvements are sometimes easy.

During the campaign for the 1964 U.S. Civil Rights bill, proponents were forced to accept very narrow enforcement rules for the section on public accommodations. Despite causing some real, unfair hardships, that section of the law was unchanged 30 years later and had served as the model for laws protecting other groups.

Figuring out the legal and political impact of a change, predicting its effects on future cases, the community, calculating how the change will affect your support and estimating when the policy could be passed without the change is tough under the most quiet, deliberative conditions. But many of your most important negotiations won't happen under those circumstances. They'll happen instead in heated moments shortly before a vote, after you've been working frantically on the campaign for months or years. In those situations, two very common reactions tend to make it even harder to balance all the considerations.

The first reaction is the sometimes-overwhelming desire to get something to show for all your months or years of work. When a change looks like it could make the difference, people sometimes agree when they should not. The second reaction is the common problem of, as negotiations drag on and you get worn out, blowing things out of proportion and treating them as if they were more important than they are.

Whatever person or small group makes your decisions in negotiations will need a legal advisor and a political advisor available to make the judgments you need to balance gain and loss. Those judgments are less likely to be skewed by the heat of the moment if one or both of those advisors are not actually doing the negotiating, and are able to bring an outside perspective. If, for example, your regular legal advisor is the prime negotiator, try to have another advisor on call during the process.

  23.6 A Couple of Negotiation Tips
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Don't actually make a change, especially an important change, to gain someone's support without an ironclad commitment. If you can get an endorsement card signed, do it. Board members and politicians usually won't sign endorsement cards. But getting a board member's promise made to or in the presence of someone whose support the member needs, who is willing to go public if the member tries to back out, is just as good. This is a place to use politicians or other important supporters.

Don't waste your time negotiating with die-hards. Sometimes, die-hard opponents will try to negotiate with you, usually with Board members or important moderate forces present. Their aim is to raise objections, and get the moderates to pressure you to compromise. However, they will almost never support the bill after changes are made. If you can, try to convince the board members or moderates to "smoke out" the other side by testing their commitment to compromise. If you can't, insist on an ironclad commitment the first time you agree to a change before you make it. That will usually end the process.

Don't say things to people you are negotiating with that have nothing to do with the process. Don't abuse people, call them names, or get emotional. Don't make threats. Don't talk about your strategy or plans. And while a very rare strategic loss of patience can be useful, it should be strategic.

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